This is not a drill.

Jun 15, 2015 18:03
I have to submit my resume to a university until this weekend.

This is not a drill.

This is a job hunting.

This might be all about my future.

I'm writing my research plans and my aspirations.

They are becoming too long text.

I'm tired.
No. 1　Timmy's correction
  • This might be all about my future.
  • My future might depend on it.
  • They are becoming too long text.
  • They are becoming too long.
Good luck! You can do it. Job hunting is always nerve-wracking, so there is no other option but to stay strong ^_^
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
I'm so happy about you words. I'll do my best!
Timmy
>Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
You are welcome!
>I'm so happy about you words. I'll do my best!
Good luck!
No. 2　Oceansea's correction
  • I have to submit my resume to a university until this weekend.
  • I have until this weekend to submit my resume to a university until this weekend.
  • This is a job hunting.
  • This is a job hunting.
  • I'm writing my research plans and my aspirations.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • They are becoming too long text.
  • They are becoming too long text.
    　I might rephrase it to something like this: "It is becoming too long of a paper."

    "It" in this sentences refers to the paper (singular) that you are writing, not to the plans (plural) themselves.
  • I'm tired.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Good luck and keep at it!
kanotown
Thank you so much for your corrections and comment!
And thank you for encouraging me :)
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